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08/08/13
Your entry gives a good example of a happy family. Your humor is enjoyable.

The husband reminds me a bit of mine. I guess some men have a taste something rotten to appreciate the really good stuff.

Thanks for sharing.
08/10/13
Great "every-day-life" story. Always easy to relate to. Humorous and light. A good family feel. I thought your finale was a bit too predictable. Maybe you could re-do it in a way that we can't see it coming, when he eats out of the wrong crock pot. Maybe start with the discovery of the rotten pot. And not saying what was done with it, or that it was chicken too, until he eats from the wrong one? Just a suggestion. Still, a nice feel good story. It just would have been so much better if I didn't know what was going to happen.
Keep up the good work!
08/10/13
This made me smile wide. It was so well done, and well placed. Great ending!!


God bless~