The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/13
Oh, be still my thumping heart!What a lovely, heart warming story. This is what we had all hoped for when we married. The MC is a fortunate man. Well done!
Lovely. Made my old heart flutter . . .
06/07/13
Nice job with this. I like it!

I thought the first two paragraphs were current day, so when it said "It was the 1970s" I thought that was a flashback,not part of the first two paragraphs. So I was a bit confused as to what "time" I was in, as I read the rest of it. But that may have been just me. (Did any of that make a lick of sense, or I have just confused you? lol) :)

Loved the ending. Nice job.
06/09/13
Awww...so sweet, so romantic, and so well-done. It put me in mind of when my hubby and I first met...in the good old seventies! Great decade.

I loved it. Thanks.

God bless~
06/13/13
Sweet story....and is he still carrying that picture?
Thanks for sharing!
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