The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/13
What a loving, sensitive, precious piece from a sister POV I am guessing. This says you know her so very well. So moving ,sad, and heartwarming at the same time. Very well done!
05/05/13
Wow, very well done, to the point I was at here with the MC, and then at my own father's funeral. Courageous piece.
05/05/13
Great writing. I enjoyed it from start to finish. It feels real and honest and touching.

My name is Brenda and I can relate to the "Brenda" in this entry.

Thanks you for sharing a wonderful piece of writing.
Rosy, nozy glue. I love Brenda already . . .
05/06/13
Death in the family is difficult. You caught the emotions well.
05/08/13
You did a good job writing from this perspective and portraying the numerous emotions felt at the funerals of loved ones.