The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/13
I thought the poem was simply beautiful. A gentle rain always relaxes me so and in your poem you captured it for me in rhyme. I just love it.
Not your best work? This is beautiful. Poetic brush strokes. Great work. Blessings.
05/04/13
Rhythmic and soothing like the gentle rain you described.
I think this is a beautiful piece of prose just like all your rest. Unique and delightful to savor and roll off the tongue.
05/04/13
I really enjoyed your poem.
Lovely.
05/05/13
Nicely done!
05/05/13
Nice rhythmic mode you created here. Well done!
05/05/13
I love the contrast between your winter and nature's spring.

Also loved the imagery of raindrops "playing out melodies in perfect time." That's exactly how they sound! Your poem paints a delightful picture!

This bit of red ink may have been a typo: window sill.

If it's not your best, then it's a close second.:-)