The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/13
Nice devotion. Technical note, when leaving out quoted text, as in the first verse, it is necessary to insert an ellipsis (...)..
04/29/13
Great devotion, carried us over a lot of the Bible. Keep Writing!
04/30/13
A very concise upward call in this devotion. You did a good job of blending the scriptures to stress the point. It might be of benefit if you'd add a personal touch, like how God has led you to apply these principles in your life. I think most people need real life examples to see how to use the knowledge, that you do so well in giving them.
I have tears in my eyes. Much like when I was a maternity nurse, it never ceased to amaze me when a baby is born. Like a birth, the way God waits until just the perfect timing for so many things to come together, this piece is one of those times and I have been blessed beyond words from it. Amazing!
CONGRATULATIONS ON RANKING 31 OVERALL!! HAPPY DANCE. I'M STILL OVERWHELMED BY THIS TRULY ARTISTIC AND TOUCHING PIECE!