The Official Writing Challenge
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Great reminder of the power of words - spoken and written. Well done
02/16/13
I felt like I was in the room with Aaron and Caleb. From the first paragraph the dynamics in the relationship between the two brothers was so vivid. I loved the dialogue and the healing that took place in this story. This is a great read and brought tears to my eyes.
Thank You for sharing your gift!
Blessings,
Francie
Awww... brought tears to my eyes. The struggle between the brothers was tangible. Good descriptions. Keep writing.
02/19/13
You told a moving story. I felt the brothers' hurt and anger and their reconciliation flowed naturally from the task. I loved the father's prayer.

I did notice a few errors in grammar and word usage, that you could fix with one more edit.

But my favorite parts of the story were the first and last paragraphs. They tied together so well.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level three and for ranking 21 overall!
02/22/13
Congratulations for winning sixth place! It was well deserved. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift.
Keep up the great work!

Blessings,
Francie