The Official Writing Challenge
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Amen! It is often easier to worry than to pray and trust that God has a plan. I am learning that lessen daily.
Excellent story, and I'm so glad it worked out so well for you. Women so underestimate themselves at that time of life of returning to the work force. I am sure so much in your life had prepared you for that position. Well done.
It never ceases to amaze me how God guides and directs our path and the curry made my mouth water. Well done.
I love the detail that gives this first-person account interest--the chicken curry made my mouth water (until you added the raisins).

I'd suggest that you not begin a story with dialogue. Most publishers don't recommend it.

Good ending--very satisfying and an excellent read all around.

Nicely done. God Bless~
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This piece much engaged and encouraged. Yes, it has love, hope, comfort and GOD'S results.