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Medical staff are often God's hands and feet. You opened my eyes to the fact that I need to keep them in prayer, so that they can be an encouragement to their patients. If this story is about you or someone you know, my prayers go out to you also.
This feels like a true story - and what an inspirational one. If it is, know I'm praying. A wonderful tribute to hospital personnel, who can be SO amazing when we are at our weakest.
This is very well-written; I was drawn into your story and enjoyed every word.

Two tiny tweaks: "Ouch!" I muttered doesn't really work as "Ouch!" is much stronger than 'muttered', and you're missing a comma after 'Within hours of being hospitalized'.

It's a testament to your strong and engaging writing that the only critique I could offer was such nitpicking. This is an excellent entry.
Beautifully said, and so enthralling throughout.
Thank you. God bless~