The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/13
Very good thoughts here - enjoyed this post.
02/12/13
I enjoyed this first-person account, and the loving tone you took toward all of the churches you've belonged to. It's too easy to find criticim of different churches today, and this was refreshing.

My only suggestion would be a slight re-working of the final paragraph, where you have the staff belonging to the Lamb. I realize that the Lamb is one of the names of Jesus, but in this case, the staff really belongs to the Shepherd, and the metaphor becomes a bit muddled.

This was a lovely read.
02/13/13
Nicely done, and well written. Thank you.

God bless~
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