The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/13
This was a moving piece that touched my heart.
God bless~
02/06/13
Great perspective of a great story!

It seems that you tried to crowd to much into the last few sentences. I suggest you end with the healing of the boy.

Great writing!
You've written a fascinating story here. I felt transported back through time. Nicely done.