The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/13
Amen and Amen. A cute way to get a very important message across, along with wonderful passages.

God Bless~
I always thought the shampoo companies put the "lather, rinse, repeat" on the bottle instructions so the shampoo would run out quicker. Then we'd have to buy more... oh, but that's a good lesson too... we always need more Jesus! Good job!
02/02/13
This is a clever way of delivering the importance of repeatedly reading God's word.
I really enjoyed reading this devotion. You did a great job of relating a story that most people will understand right at the beginning.

The tiny bit of red ink I have is the em dash--is used to show an interruption or a sudden change of direction in a story or dialog. Instead of the dash commas would have been just fine here.

I think your transition from the shower and shampoo into God's Word was fantastic. I could see your point from a different perspective. It's always good when a story makes one think. The Bible passage is a great match for your message. Good job.