The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/13
Awwww...I loved this sweet sweet story. This is my kind of read, happy endings, good reunions, and wonderful things to come in the future. Great job, well written, and a joy to read.

I want a sequel! Tell us more. God bless~
01/29/13
Good job with the surprise near the end; the influenza was a great cover story. I thought there was perhaps too much story here for 750 words, and as a result, some of the characters had to summarize events in the past. And I needed some additional details to firmly establish the setting. The mood is lovely, and the story is a satisfying read.