The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/13
What a lovely entry with truth and love resonating throughout the entire poem. Beautifully done.

God bless~
Beautifully written, thanks for showing how peace can be found above the storm.
01/28/13
I like your re-working of this verse from the Psalms, and your structure, which is loose with meter. I'd encourage you to develop more complex rhymes, and to use other poetic devices. I could feel the longing here, and the poem is quite successful.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in level three and 36 overall!