The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/13
Loved how you did this whole entry. Wonderful message with a powerful prayer at the close. Beautiful.

God Bless~
Great depiction of how there is always a silver lining, even in our suffering.
01/28/13
I like the idea of writing a devotional in story form, and these two have a lovely relationship. Work on making your dialog more realistic-sounding, and on giving this familiar situation (overworked, over-committed) some sort of twist. With some of your leftover words, you might add details and action so that your readers can visualize this couple. I enjoyed reading this piece and imagining Marcia finally getting the rest she needs.
Congratulations on ranking 9th in level three and 38 overall!