The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story. I had expected it to end with his death, but I'm glad it was a more upbeat ending!
I'm so glad this was in admiration of parents and uplifting all the way through. What a great perspective!
01/22/13
Good upbeat, and my kind of ending. Thanks.

God bless~
This brought tears to my eyes. I enjoyed the trek through the continents. You pulled me right into the setting. It reminded me of one of the greatest compliments I have received. It was barely a year since Mom died, I had just spoken about her as we dedicated money for Sunday School in her name. A stranger to me, put his hand on my shoulder and said between tears, "You're definitely your mother's daughter." Thank you for taking me back to that day.
01/24/13
Hearty congratulations on your level and E.C. wins for this excellent and touching story! WAY TO WRITE!! :)
01/24/13
Wonderful story of the example and influence that carries on through to each generation.
01/25/13
Congrats. God bless~