The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/12
I had just gotten it together after reading the previous article, and now you have me crying again. Very memorable, having the parrot ask the question over and over.
11/26/12
Great read and very will constructed. You held my interest throughout. Awesome writing!
11/27/12
WOnderful job. Excellent entry. Thanks. God bless~
Wow this is such a powerful story. It is filled with all kinds of raw emotion. You did a great job with this piece.
11/29/12
Beautifully-framed story that pulls the reader into the pain and the bewilderment, and the reassurance. Great work Jack, and congratulations on your placing.
Congratulations on your second place ribbon and for ranking 15 overall!