The Official Writing Challenge
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This story is based on a creative idea. It seemed to be too short, though, with a quick ending.A unique take on the challenge topic that stands out from the others.
Hahahahahaha....This is a different and highly entertaining Sci-Fi entry. And, I'm usually not into Sci-Fi!

Good job with this unorthodox approach on the topic. Nicely done.

God Bless~
An interesting story with a great sense of humor totally unexpected for such a topic. I particularly like your adding 'My reputation for barbequing must be broader than I thought.' LOL! Well done on a nicely written piece.
Oh my goodness, I love how your mind works! What a delightful run of imagination with clever twists of humor, like:

"Is this my last meal, my last breath on this earth? Will my dog ever stop running?"

And that footnote at the end!

Loved it, and would have loved to see the story expanded out farther. (or is it, further?)
Congratulations on your first place finish!
Hee-hee! A funny Sci-Fi piece! Now THAT is CREATIVE!! HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 1ST PLACE IN ADVANCED AND ON YOUR E.C.!!!!!!!!!! What a great sense of humor you must have! I loved the line about his first rule being "always feed the hungry, especially when they may be packing ray guns"!! :D Way to write!
COngrats on your win and EC! God Bless~
Very clever and concise, though there is 'space' for more to come - maybe a side serve of toasted martianmellows to go with the K9 - but congratulations on your win.
Tee Hee...big grin. Very creative and fun! Congratulations.