The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/05
Very cute and very true for so many of us! I like the lilt to their conversation..is a trolley a shopping cart??:)
11/02/05
I like the way you incorporated their everyday conversation about their purchases with their spiritual conversation. It was very real. Well done!
11/03/05
Yes, very well done. Fun and thoughtful.
Oh my. Here I was thinking I could spend the night at the computer reading and commenting on challenge entries and the first one I read challenges me about neglecting my husband! LOL. What am I going to do now? Well written K2. Good on you.
A well drawn example of positive peer group pressure. We all needs friends of this calibre.
Bright and interesting what a combination!
11/04/05
Selfless acts of love are a fragrant offering to God. You presented this beautiful message in every day circumstances. Great work!
11/05/05
Realism and friendshop..(LOL) This was really nice. Thank you for sharing! God bless, littlelight
11/05/05
Very nice -had me laughing -and thinking.
11/07/05
Hi Karen, I just wanted to take a moment to encourage you. In spite of the dreaded roman numerals, you actually did very well in the Fragrance Challenge, ranking 27th overall (out of 145 entries). Well done! With love, Deb