The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/12
A sound message and I appreciate the simple flow to the overall piece.

There were a few places where time references were confused (using "have" instead of had), using a present tense verb when you are talking about a past tense situation. Also, not sure you needed to isolate te scripture reference in the beginning since you re-state it later in the story. I think it would have been fine to just start with the story itself.

Overall ... nice work!
03/08/12
Loved this especially the prayer at the end! God bless!
03/08/12
Beautiful message and outstanding ending. Nice job. God Bless~
Well said. Amen and amen!!
This is lovely. The scripture is a perfect fit for the topic and you built upon it nicely. Earlier I read when caught between a rock and a hard place, always go toward the Rock (Jesus) This reminded me of that as well.
03/12/12
Very positive and biblical approach to a vexed question.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 3!