The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a wonderful job bringing these verses to life.
02/10/12
Truly well written - and a great job of utilizing the scriptures within the story.
God Bless~
02/13/12
A wonderfully written retelling and a powerfully reminder of His amazing and "astonishing" truth!
I thought this was totally delightful to read. I felt as if it had happened in MY house or that I at least attended this meeting. How exciting!
Well done. good job getting inside the home owners mind too.
02/15/12
I just love it when someone fills out a Bible story as realistic as this. Well done!
02/16/12
I bet YOU are astonished that you won! Good for you! You are a HIGH achiever!
02/16/12
Congratulations! You make my heart smile!
02/16/12
Congratulations, Karlene!
Good job!!
I like the flow and the voice of the narrator. This story is very well written; it put me right there and his thoughts were thoughts that I would likely have had. Well done!
02/16/12
Oh, Karls. FABULOUS description - and ECE ;). And you know how I feel about biblical fiction. Great stuff - congrats, my dear friend :)
02/16/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
02/16/12
Congrats, Karls!!!!! Woo Hoo!!!! :) :)
02/16/12
Powerful! You captured the scene perfectly. Way to go, Karls :D
02/16/12
Congrats Karlene! Awesome job!