The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/12
Hahahahaha...Funny story, great ending. Nicely told.
God bless~
Oh this is so funny! You went in a totally different direction then I thought you were going. Love your sense of humor!
This piece literally made me laugh out loud! There is some hilarious imagery in here, and a really creative take on the topic. Well done!
01/20/12
A nice story and written very well. It flowed easily and keep me interested from start to finish. Wonderful job!
01/22/12
Humorous and well written! Enjoyed!
01/22/12
Loved the sense of let-down that ripped across my expectations here. Good fun stuff, though I'm puzzled how a town can have a population of "Now minus one," which would put it into cosmic "black hole" calculations. I guess you meant "now one less."
I'm wondering if there are ninety two again, because I'd love to know if these two link up again????
01/23/12
What a great story-teller you are from start to finish!
Can't tell which one to feel sorry for - Harry or Karen.

Great story line and laced with humor. Although the title says it all, there are still many ways to interpret this story, and that's a compliment.:-)
01/23/12
Well, this completely surprised me - the expectation of Harry and Karen riding off into the sunset together just didn't happen. Delightfully charming and very well written! God bless!
I love "tongue in cheek" humor - great job.
01/26/12
LOL---didn't see THAT coming. Good one, well done!
01/29/12
Further studies of Yuba portending? Great story. Great book?