The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
I love your last line! Commitment really is a gift we give to others, a choice we make to put them before ourselves. I really enjoyed this; perhaps the formatting could be a little 'tweaked' to make for easier reading, but overall it flowed well and raised very pertinent points. Well done.
01/13/12
Nicely done with a strong and powerful message.
God Bless you~
01/17/12
I enjoyed the message but had difficulty reading, since the formatting was off.