The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/11
Poor Jeremy Angel – what a disappointing trip! And just think those are only three of endless, countless sins God and the angels witness from earth daily! Compared to Heaven earth is indeed a pit! I think this is almost the opposite of “much ado about nothing” …it is people giving no heed to something important…the sin in their lives! Enjoyed the read!
08/07/11
A positive challenge expressed in a really imaginative style.
08/08/11
An excellent and sad portrayal of what’s wrong with this world. You've hit the nail on the head in delivering the truths of the message about the evil schemes of the devil in deceiving the world to think sin is acceptable, which is definitely NOT. An excellent piece well written!