The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/11
I could feel the heat rising-- off the sizzling streets of the city, the souped up cars, and the ire of young ladies with tempers and the young men who dared to tease them.

I like how you brought it around at the end; forgiveness in Christ Jesus. Now that's a happy ending!
07/28/11
Boys will be boys. The last sentence of the 1st paragraph had to be re-read by me a couple times. Perhaps it should have simply read: Subtract a measure of common sense and you get a recipe for trouble. Good story telling but for some reason I wanted to know the color of the car but what do I know, I've been drooling over my neighbor's '66 Green Mustang since I discovered it 2 days ago.