The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/11
Your intro is very strong and it flows smoothly into some strong characters, but I felt your ending was a bit too rushed, even though it is all true.
08/04/11
Debby, a big congratulations on this entry. I am so proud of you!

I loved your summary especially..."being lured away from the Father" etc. Great points and ones we need to take to heart.

Thank God for His grace and mercy!
So glad you placed with this excellent retelling of the Prodigal Son!
08/04/11
Congratulations on HC win –wonderfully told Prodigal story – your award well deserved!