The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/11
A beautifully written story of a little girl trying to come to terms with the death of her father.
I love the patience displayed by her mother as she seeks to share the joy of Christmas with her grieving daughter. Her patience is so admirable.
Your beautiful descriptive voice really enhances the story.
07/24/11
Your creative descriptions paint such a peaceful scene with realistic dialogue. I enjoyed this sweet story.