The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
This is a touching little story.
10/18/05
I loved this story. It was well crafted and left me with a warm, fuzzy feeling. :-) What goes around definitely comes around - this time in a good way! Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
10/18/05
Liked this one. A well-told, touching story.
10/18/05
Wow, a great touching story, albeit predictable, but I love a story with such a happy outcome. Thanks.
Such and endearing read! So sweet.
What a touching story and as sweet as one of Ben's juicy apples. God bless.
10/21/05
Great story--very good job drawing the reader into Ben and David's relationship. David's transition to adulthood seemed a bit too passing, but it's so darn hard to stick to the word limit--you did a great job!
I really enjoyed this take on the theme. Touching and heartfelt. Well done.
10/24/05
Lori, I just wanted to let you know that you ranked 6th in the Level 3 list, and 14th overall (out of a total of 135 entries). So be encouraged. You did very, very well. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)