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05/26/11
I do love the story of David, and I enjoyed this retelling of it.

And as for David's comment,

"It was before the LORD I danced. I will play music before the Lord. And I will become even more undignified than this, and will be humble in my own sight."

I say, Rock On David, Rock On.
05/28/11
Very good informational piece about King David, as well as good story and good message about judging others actions.

I like how you point out how passionate David was, lots of people and churches could use some of that passion to wake them up! LOL Enjoyed the read.
05/28/11
Thanks for helping us see the many sides of this "man after God's heart."
05/29/11
This is a clear warning, with a touch of humour thrown in. I don't know about other readers, but some typo gremlin spoiled the effect of your message for me at times; as stray symbols seemed to be replacing quotation marks.
You did a great job with this retelling. You opened my eyes to things I didn't know or had forgotten The is the gift of an artful author.

Congratulations for ranking 8th in level 3!