The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/11
Wonderful realism in your MC, and a modern-day insight into a first century event that took me by surprise with industrial-strength credibility. Very enjoyable read.
03/05/11
Reminds me of the song, Cats in the Cradle." We go to great lengths to avoid time cunsuming events, and end up consuming most of our life with unimportant things. I'm glad the main character got a second chance.
03/09/11
I liked the modern day feel to a story that took place during Jesus's time.

Very well done.
03/10/11
Congratulations on your EC!
03/10/11
I loved this piece. (It's one of my favorite Bible stories). Even with the word count restriction, you did a great job.
05/31/11
Jody, I'm going to feature this inspiring story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of June 20. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
06/21/11
Lovely story,Jody! Great job!