The Official Writing Challenge
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A light touch here; and not just on the game controls; but on the growth in the thinking of the young Big (computer) Game Hunter! Well drawn characters.
Fun idea! I liked the ending - not too cut and dried, but playing to the MC's natural tendencies. Well done.
Very good job here of showing not telling for the topic with true-to-life characters. I liked the ending, too.
This wasn't too confronting, but really underlines the need for moderation in all things. Excellent job! (And I am so pleased your character decided to go to the youth group!).
Well presented and so appropriate for this day and age. Your message was very clear and it was easy to relate to your MC. Well done.
Congrats on getting Highly Commended! This was a really good story, and very suitable for the topic. I loved the beginning, how you put us into the action, and then revealed that it was a video game. It's amazing how addicting it can be to have your own little fantasy world. Great job!