The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/11
A light touch here; and not just on the game controls; but on the growth in the thinking of the young Big (computer) Game Hunter! Well drawn characters.
03/04/11
Fun idea! I liked the ending - not too cut and dried, but playing to the MC's natural tendencies. Well done.
03/05/11
Very good job here of showing not telling for the topic with true-to-life characters. I liked the ending, too.
03/09/11
This wasn't too confronting, but really underlines the need for moderation in all things. Excellent job! (And I am so pleased your character decided to go to the youth group!).
03/09/11
Well presented and so appropriate for this day and age. Your message was very clear and it was easy to relate to your MC. Well done.
03/19/11
Congrats on getting Highly Commended! This was a really good story, and very suitable for the topic. I loved the beginning, how you put us into the action, and then revealed that it was a video game. It's amazing how addicting it can be to have your own little fantasy world. Great job!