The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
Interesting images and thoughts - well done!
Oh I like, I like, I like. This was a pure joy for me to read. I loved the voice, the rhythms, the internal and external rhymes, aliteration.... It was packed with poetic power and so very visual and enjoyable to read. As you can guess, I am a big fan of this sort of expression, especially when so artfully and soulfully delivered. Great job. Wow! Even better performed aloud. We can't always catch the judges ear, but for what little I know, this is stellar in my book.
Congratulations for placing 11th in Masters and 11th overall!