The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
WOW! This is awesome!I am going to try that next time I go to the dentist.

I am a big fan of Indianna Jones and saw the parody from the start, but did not see the ending coming.

(I was waiting for the snakes to come in somewhere)
01/13/11
Absolutely loved this. How very creative! You had to me entranced to the very end.
01/13/11
Hilarious—wish I could be as creative in the dentist's chair!
01/13/11
Why did denture warn me about the twist at the end? Fangs for nothing!
But seriously I loved it for the imagery and wry sense of suspense. This would make a great children's story, though I don't know if the AMA (or ADA) would ever use it as propaganda. Brilliant stuff.
01/13/11
Funny, funny, funny! It was fabulous from the very beginning, but then the end had such a fantastic twist. I want to read more!
01/13/11
Great little story. I agree with Sarah. The twist at the end was very entertaining.
01/14/11
Ha! Very entertaining and clever. The ending didn't take me by complete surprise but I enjoyed it just the same. I like reading a story I wouldn't have thought of in a million years. Great job.
01/15/11
This gets an extra-credit score for creativity! Very fun to read! :-)
01/16/11
I loved this short story! Imaginative and clever.
01/17/11
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one! I should show this to my dentist!
01/19/11
This was just too fun. Well done!
01/21/11
Josh, your writing amazes (and amuses) me. I hope nothing ever stops you from sharing your wonderful humor with us.