The Official Writing Challenge
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12/24/10
Broken communication i.e. broken promises and the devastation left by both.
A beautiful poem with a sad reality. Great writing.
Faded dreams ...
Amidst clouded drooping heads ...
Flowered words ...
Became untruths.
Sworn promises ...
Long forgotten
That once we spoke but never knew.


Poetic description of failure to communicate. Great job!
The emotion in your poem shows such a deep sadness--nothing much unhappier than faded love and broken promises!
12/29/10
This is very beautifully expressed-thanks for sharing, I enjoyed the read!
12/29/10
Beautiful, but so poignant and sad at the same time. Great, great job!
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