The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/10
This is so creative for the topic. I love the image of God looking from His throne on one of His children praying.
I felt like God was talking just to me and I felt so special. Your words really touched my heart.
liquid prayers ... great job!
12/06/10
Good imagery, strong rhythm and rhyme make this is a well-written poem with a great message.
12/06/10
Inspiring use of simple but effective imagery, and I just love the sense of perspective that is gently reinforced throughout.