The Official Writing Challenge
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I knew from the beginning that they were going to meet a coffin not a live person, but I still felt like I was punched in the gut when you revealed it for sure. That is outstanding writing, you did a great job setting the scene and mood. Beautiful!!
11/12/10
Tearfully touching.

What a great example of how cyber communication can serve toward the glory of God.

Well done.
11/15/10
Very sad story moving hearts. Although cyber communication can do much, it cannot give that same warmth from a personal touch. You have expressed the emotions in the story very well. Excellent piece.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3 and 20th overall!