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Topic: Cyber Communication (email, IM’s, etc) (11/04/10)
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TITLE: Philippe and Penelope: Classical Tweet? | Previous Challenge Entry
By Henry Clemmons
11/09/10 -
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Now quenched and blind by torrent tweets from you
How crude to thrust a blade from distant aim
Your weapon’s cold but accuracy true
I would have thought such dainty fingers kind
Petite so far away from scorn-like crass
To read such callused frost I froze in time
My Droid fell silent from ice bitten hands
But love can die even in castle gray
It’s penned a thousand times in life’s sonnets
I would prefer honesty face to face
Yet lips can be as sharp and deftly cut
So whether in a park or by a tweet
I still stroll lonely your abandoned street
- Sir Philippe
- Lady Penelope
I hate my sister’s tweet tore us apart
I hope my words by pen will reach your heart
Though lies have flown in guise of cyber truth
I have not moved away from castle sight
Your touch will ever spark my mem’ries mood
But love that’s true will fight for breath and life
My Torch is gone along with my broadband
Forgiveness will be hard for sister’s sake
Yet still I want for strength holding my hand
My health is frail and future dim on days
My love for you is true there is no doubt
In fevered daze I see you on my street
My mindless sis thought she was helping out
It was not I that thrust those awful tweets
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I don't know but to me the word Broadband didn't sit comfortably with either the rhythm or the tone of the poetry.
That aside, I loved the sheer imagination and romance.