The Official Writing Challenge
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This is wonderful! I enjoyed the message and chuckled at the slight paranoia of the MC. The Bible verse is perfect!
Loved the title. It drew me in.
What a clever version of the topic. I too enjoyed the dash of paranoia. God never lets us down does he? You are most talented.
As an Aussie I had wondered about working in the line you've used for your title, but you have done it so much better than I could have - and without Overflowing! (an Aussie in-joke there, folks) I loved your word pictures and your sense of urgency. Very well put together.
I LOVE the voice in this outstanding entry! Love that you told just a tiny, tiny moment--perfect for 750 words. This is very, very good.
Your title drew me to this piece, and I'm glad I read it! Amazingly original, and so heartfelt. I loved every word.
Wow! What an entry! Excellent work. You are truely becomeing a great writer. Congratulations on your placing. It was well deserved.
Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations on your recognition for this oustanding story. Well done, indeed.
You are a writer without a shadow of a doubt. Very impressive. A unique voice I could read again and again. please stay around :)
Congrats on EC.
God bless.
Good job.
Congratulations on your 9th place EC. I really enjoyed your work.
God Bless.
I LOVED this! Very skillful writing here. Consistent voice all the way through. Nicely done!