The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely and gently tugs at my heart.
I felt a lonely, haunting presence in this. It speaks from seeking peace from past events. The reader can sense the downcast spirit. Good writing and word flow except for a few punctuation errors. Blessings. :)
Lyrical writing--quite melancholy.

This may have skirted the topic a bit--it reads more like an internal monologue than a letter.

The sense of longing is beautifully portrayed.
Sweet dreams tonight, may the Dream Maker visit us all. Sweet dreams bring hope. I enjoyed the lyrical feel to this story.
Funny! I shouldn't follow Jan. I don't read other people's comments until I write some...this is like the third time I've said similar things to Jan's. I'm not copying her...honest.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level 3!