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10/21/10
A truly heart-rending story that portrays a life redeemed.
10/21/10
Good story told told in the poetic form. Thanks for sharing...all it takes is one person caring enough to change a life.
10/21/10
Abuse is not to be tolerated...period. Supporting those in need is a mandate under the heading of "Love one another." Your story connected it very well. A good article for support groups. Blessings :)
This is a touching poem on a difficult topic. You did a great job pulling me into the verse and hoping the MC find her way.
10/25/10
This is a good story in poetry format. It's a reminder of how important it can be to talk to those we meet and reach out to needs.
10/26/10
Your first stanza is a perfect 'hook' to get your readers to want to read on.

Your meter was 'off' in a few places; I'd love to see it evened out, to give this moving poem a more consistent flow.

A wonderful confirmation of the power of friendship.