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10/21/10
You chose the perfect scripture. The body of the devotion clearly stated your message without being preachy. The prayer was heartfelt and one I really needed to pray right now. Great job!
10/21/10
A beautiful devotional. Great job!
10/21/10
I also wanted to write about a conversation Jesus had with someone in the Bible but it just didn't work out well on paper. You've done a superb job of expressing the importance of personal contact and caring in reaching out to others. You did what I wasn't able to do. Well done.
10/25/10
Good devotional with a message for us all. Face to face exchanges just tend to be much more searching, and I can only imagine the eye contact in this particular conversation with Jesus. It could have made Peter crawl away like a worm, but instead, made him a devoted lifetime follower and leader.
10/25/10
Well done! You have a good mix of Scripture, examples from life, and lessons for your readers.
10/26/10
This is one of my favorite stories from Scripture. I love how Jesus called Peter back to him even after he did such a despicable thing as rejecting him. I think you covered the topic very well with this message.

One little note: I think the (John 21:15-17 NIV) reference should come after the quoted verses instead of before it. At least, that's how I'm supposed to do it on all my school papers.

Blessings! :)
10/26/10
I'm always blessed and challenged when reading your devotions. This one is no exception! Very nice work!
10/27/10
Well written and powerful. Volumes could be written about these two characters. Shalom :)