The Official Writing Challenge
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I gelt like I was in the room praying for Mandy. A real live prayer chain like that is something that is difficult to describe but you handled it like a Master.
I could see so much of myself in your main character. I really liked this and your last line was especially powerful, I thought. Good writing!
I went through a time in my life when I wouldn't rely on anyone. You nailed your MCs thoughts. I'm glad that she finally realized that she too was a broken vessel.