The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/10
This is a realistic picture of an addict, I would think. I love your ending. It was a surprise.
I was hooked from the beginning. The character seemed quite real, and I enjoyed the fact that he was too smart to get addicted. Your story showed that drugs don't discriminate , they can get the smart, the beautiful, and the wealthy just as easily as anyone else.
08/27/10
This was really good. I was feeling so sorry for the poor, unsuspecting woman, not knowing that she was more than capable of taking care of herself! I thought you portrayed the addict very well, too. Very nice writing!
Good job at suspense. You had me from the beginning. I appreciated the turn of events... that the female character was not victimized. Thanks.
The motive behind the crime had me a little puzzled (why did a police woman have patches?) but the ending was a real surprise. Thanks!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.