The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so touching. I loved how you mixed the chocolate in so many of your descriptions.
Great read!
Well-written. I didn't understand the first line until the end and then it made sense. Good job.
Your first line intrigued me and pulled me in. I too undestood by the end of the story. Great sensory descriptions. Loved the "truffles" line toward the ending...what a lovely description of the sisters.
Sometimes it takes me awhile to understand your writing. Multi-leveled. But when I finally dive into the depth of the story it touches me greatly.
You did an excellent job in plotting this story and keeping it right on topic.
This was a wonderful story. I loved how you wove the scent of chocolate all the way through! Blessings, Ruth
I love this story. Chocolatey memories. Do they get any better than that?

My daughter wore brown capris and a brown shirt with her brown hair one day while home. I wanted to eat her up. Was really needing a chocolate fix! :)

Have fun at the conference, Sara!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.