The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job of showing how your life changed and how you knew you needed to make a change. I smiled at your wording of being in the dumps and how you realized your life stunk. Very clever.
What a clever use of the topic. I like how you used this to turn our thoughts to things of God. Good job!
08/10/10
I like the correlation between the junk in the dump to the junk in our lives. Strong analogies, well done. I could relate to going to the dump...about a million years ago when I was a child, my grandfather would take me to the dump with him. You wouldn't believe some of the treasures he found there.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.