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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: See (07/22/10)

TITLE: I See His Wonder . . .
By Deborah Ann Belka
07/22/10


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I see Godís beauty,
I see His light.
And it does not fade,
into the night.

It shines brighter,
than a thousand stars.
And rides across the sky,
from the Moon to Mars.

I see the distance,
from God to man.
And I know His love,
fills the spacious span.

For His love is forever,
it goes on and on.
And that is why,
I cling on to His Son.

I see His wonder,
it is all around me.
It shines brighter,
than my eye can see.

I see His glory,
in its awesome wonder.
And before I know it,
He is the sound of thunder.

I see His mercy,
you must see it too.
It surrounds you and me,
in everything we do.

I see His goodness,
when I wake up each day.
And for my own reason,
I must follow His way.

I see His grace,
bestowed on my soul.
And it is free,
so I can be bold.

I see His love,
radiating down on me.
And that is why,
these blind eyes can see.

I see His greatness,
it is shinning on you.
And I know,
I am bathe in it too.

I see His wonder,
I see it everywhere,
And I pray that you,
will too be aware!


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Caitlyn Meissner07/30/10
Thank you for reminding us of the many things that God shows us. Good job!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/31/10
This is a beautiful poem and it speaks the truth. I noticed a tiny typo in the penultimate stanza, you used bathe when either the am should not be there (which would ruin the meter) or it should be bathed. But the sentiment and your passion for the Lord is what really shines through.
AnneRene' Capp 07/31/10
I could almost picture the author writing this as I felt the heart pour forth such a deserving bounty of gratitude and adoration for our God. Amen!
Brenda Shipman 08/01/10
Lovely; thank you for letting us see through your eyes the wonder and majesty of our great God.
Lollie Hofer 08/02/10
I enjoyed the message in your poem.
Lollie Hofer 08/02/10
I enjoyed the message in your poem.
Genia Gilbert08/02/10
Thanks for making your awareness of the beauty of God's creation so clear.
Nancy Sullivan 08/03/10
Ilove the simplicity and the easy read to this poem. Beautifully expressed insight.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 08/05/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall!