The Official Writing Challenge
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At first glance the thoughts seem all a jumble but as I read on I appreciated the deep emotion behind each thought and was touched that you would share them with the world. Your descriptions of the little angel and your prince charming brought a smile to my face. Good job.
I love this little family. Honestly, I think you should have focused on one memory and expanded it. Let us get to know the little cutie better. I like it, though. Minty sweet:)
Cleverly unique and so enjoyable as I related to the author's thoughts, so well!
I like the depth of your character. I was glad that she found a sweet memory.
Loved the thinking process of the mc and how she was able to resolve her conflict. Interesting take on the week's challenge theme.
Super creative work on this! …and at the center is LOVE …and a tic-tac! Loved this!
I most liked the happy family in your story for the mc, who had already had too much unhappiness for one so young.
I like the family and the ending, but I was confused in the middle. You changed tenses several times so I couldn't tell what was a memory and what was the present. But I really liked the train of thought that kept going in different directions.