The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/10
I think your creativity is great here. I was completely engaged throughout the story. Nice work!
Scarlet Fury,
what a clever piece. I had to read it a couple of times to get it's full impact. Hearing what our behaviour is saying. Very interesting piece.
07/19/10
Great take on this week's topic. The actions of your mc conveyed her fears and concerns. I liked her. And I liked the twist at the end. Cleverly done and well-written.
This was great. It gave me a big smile. I thought she was doing a good job of annoying the class when they all wanted her to hurry-up. It was a pleasant surprise that there was more to it.
07/20/10
Fresh and believable and on topic.

Mona
07/20/10
A fun and original take on the topic. I think I might have been tempted to tear up the paper in front of the professor and throw it at him. Annoyed professor--end of assignment. But I liked your ending better. Good job!
07/20/10
This was creative, fast-paced and fun! I bet this was fun to write...great job!
07/21/10
Very creatively written and entertaining.
great story...did it really happen...beyond your very active imagination?
Great story for the subject.
God Bless. Keep writing.