The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/10
Very insightful ... and real.
Wow. Very real feeling. Good work.
Scary daughter scene. And yes, unfortunately it does sound realistic. If only more people would learn this lesson in time. Good job!
07/17/10
This was good! I painfully caught glimpses of myself in Susan (which reminds me - great title!). I especially liked your use of "Dr. McCharlatan" - very creative! This is one I wouldn't mind reading again!
07/19/10
Wow! Good intentions just don't always work, do they? Hope your MC's wake-up call came before it's too late. Very good job!
07/19/10
Delusion is so appropriate!
Your story rolled along like a poem which had to be followed.Good writing.Blessings,Ruth
08/05/10
This is intense and so creative. You are definitely a polished writer. I knew I'd find something good, here, after reading the generous comment you left on my "smell" entry. Thank you so much! I look forward to becoming better acquainted.