The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job capturing David's voice, his turmoil and eventual hope. Nice description of cave setting. My favorite line re: David's writing, "God had allowed him to express his fears, frustration, and pain then took the darkness and merged it into joy so David would know he was not alone." Amen. May all of our writing reflect this process!
I really like the voice in this, it had some great lines!
Very descriptive writing to your interesting story.

This was so good. I thoroughly enjoyed this even though I thought it a bit light on topic. I loved David's voice in this. Well done, well done indeed.
I liked the framework of this one. Creative AND well done!