The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/10
Very creative. Loved it!
04/16/10
This is the kind of fiction that captures my attention. Great dialogue and action.
This is well written and very suspenseful. Excellent job.
04/17/10
Wonderful!
I thought this piece was very well written. I could see this being used as a very effective tool for a youth class. You may want to consider lengthening the story line later. This has great potential! God Bless you and your quill.
04/22/10
I love your imagery as you lift the veil into this fourth dimension that too often we overlook. Very well done, and may God continue to share his victory in you and through you.